[MAP] TDM by ricczz

Would be better for DM, but it is good for a start. On the top left, try to make the background tiles a little darker than the foreground tiles to make it easier to distinguish the difference. For CTF, i recommend symmetry, but it's okay

mhh
I think its good for your first map
now you have to experiment with the whole map editor =]
I hadnt got a tutorial and learned all allone
Hvae fun

I can just agree to the posts before.

For your first map it is really good (compared with the first maps of other new mappers (oh hell, what some new mappers show us.. )).

But ofc its not that good compared with official maps:

1. Movement isnt very smooth:
   

   • Buttom has just single "islands" (hard to move)

   • You shouldn't use "stairs" (slows down)

   • Pickups are hard to get with high speed

   • Narrow corridors slow down

2. Pickups aren't placed well:
   

   • Main pickups are on top right (not balanced on the map)

   • Hard to reach

3. Balancement red/blue:
   

   • Height advantage for red (red can shoot down the corridors with grenades, while blue can only shoot up (rifle/gun)

   • "Number of pickups advantage" for blue

4. Graphics:
   

   • No background

   • only few doodads

However, i'm excited to see more maps!

Im sure your second will be a great map :)
Just dont forget: Have fun and enjoy teeworlds! ;)

A lot of the main problems have been pointed out by alias, ghost and slayer, I'm not gonna repeat these, but there is one I would especially like to tell you:

Mapping is not filling a quad. It's something I very often see with new mappers, and I did the same in my beginnings. You shouldn't create your map on the editor, that's important. Design it like you want with a pencil and a sheet of paper then reproduce it in the editor, and rearrange it later. It looks obvious you have started from a quad then tried to put some blocks onto it. If you would have used the pencil to draw and imagine, you wouldn't have done something so quadratic.

Again, it's nothing bad, it's absolutely normal, and to be honest your map is a good start.

Last advice, not to improve your map by any means, but you save you some time: right click on a tile, and click "Game tiles" then "Collision", it will make everything from this tile solid, so you won't have to fill it manually