1 (edited by i am king 2010-09-17 19:11:35)

Topic: [ART] FirstArt, COMMENTS PLEASE!

i'v been watching/searchin around the graphics forums,
and i have made something that i want to share with you guys,
It's my first art so i need some improvemenst by you guys how i can be better or do better.


Tee in love:
http://i54.tinypic.com/2lbdzf5.png

Tee in love #2  Made with tips from DarkM <3
http://i53.tinypic.com/2rcq1d5.png

Art project done in: 7 days.

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Re: [ART] FirstArt, COMMENTS PLEASE!

2 much hearts
blue feets?
non oval eyes
shadow?
smile

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@ZeSaM, Tnx for you comment =]

about the hearts i was just copy and paste them i was realy paying attention to the amout of the hearts about the. bleu feets i took that i tough it would be cute XD i will choose darkbrown feets next time? what do you mean with non oval eyes can u show me how it sud be done correctly so i can improve, the shadow is crap yea i agree ;p i wos just trying to make something but yea i will do my best on my second art.

Art project done in: 7 days.

4 (edited by DarkM 2010-09-17 15:09:47)

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I like the tee, but why he has such huge eyes? xDD it looks like hes more scared then inlove XD
and the red of the hearts is to bright)
I like da way u drew da feet and shadowz) fix a bit and it will be awzom)
only - da feet that is behind da tee should be all covered with shadow)

I'll show you Kuzma's mother!(c)Nikita Hrushev
DarkMarta - Artist. cool
Rise up, and dont you fall down again... Rise up, its time we break the chains.

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@ DarkM, Thnx for your comment =]

Tanks that u like my tee, i don't really know why the eyes are so huge i will try to make them better the next art.
yea about the hearts they are to bright i see now i agree with that. i will pay more attention in the shadows and the feets the next time.

Art project done in: 7 days.

6 (edited by i am king 2010-09-17 19:13:03)

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@admin/mods. Srry for double post! )):

i have made another art i worked verry detailed on it in my opinion.
this art that i made is based on my ingame teeworlds character so don't say why bleu feets or something like that.
if you think i have to fix more in my style or do something else tell me i will be pleased to accept ur change,

ingame:
http://i53.tinypic.com/2i1kpr4.png

Tee in love #2 TNX DARKM!
http://i53.tinypic.com/2rcq1d5.png

Art project done in: 7 days.

7 (edited by DarkM 2010-09-18 11:42:59)

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no probz dude xD
Bout da way u drew da lights. U can see lights like that in my arts too, but I saw that people dun like em much.
And really - It looks better like it, look -


DarkM wrote:

http://pikucha.ru/614558/image.jpeg

Its OR very realistic, OR comic like)

I'll show you Kuzma's mother!(c)Nikita Hrushev
DarkMarta - Artist. cool
Rise up, and dont you fall down again... Rise up, its time we break the chains.

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Something like this;

BoyTee <3 GirlTee:
http://i56.tinypic.com/r0uiit.png

Art project done in: 7 days.

9 (edited by DarkM 2010-09-18 18:48:48)

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Its better then the other onez, but do u have any other ideas exept tees inlove? xD

I'll show you Kuzma's mother!(c)Nikita Hrushev
DarkMarta - Artist. cool
Rise up, and dont you fall down again... Rise up, its time we break the chains.

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First of all someone hates me on this forum he votes everything down on my post o.O

Second @DarkM, i will make a Art collection so i wont post anything else right now until i did like some 5 arts and the reason of the love thing is just to see where my work came from to where i have much ideas and im gonna make them now because of you and your help i know how to make nice arts in my opinion.

X-Bot,
(Can a admin/mod close this topic please)

Art project done in: 7 days.

11 (edited by DarkM 2010-09-19 14:54:19)

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Pfff.. Its just some lowlife coolguy, dont close ur topic just cause of that =_=
I [+] all) goodluck with artmakin yo ;P

sidez - u started diz topic not so long time ago, and u have 9,000+ viewz. o_O

I'll show you Kuzma's mother!(c)Nikita Hrushev
DarkMarta - Artist. cool
Rise up, and dont you fall down again... Rise up, its time we break the chains.

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DarkM wrote:

sidez - u started diz topic not so long time ago, and u have 9,000+ viewz. o_O

How can you see this? (Sorry for offtopic)

» Use the Search Function before opening multiple topics...
» Member of: JsA - Just stay Alloha! (since 2009)

13 (edited by Lanta 2010-09-19 15:15:58)

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Tee Killa wrote:
DarkM wrote:

sidez - u started diz topic not so long time ago, and u have 9,000+ viewz. o_O

How can you see this? (Sorry for offtopic)

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/3435/75653598.jpg

Btw DarkM we are following this user because after 1 or 2 warnings he isn't able to learn to use the REPORT function -.- At least, I'm doing it... it's not a good behaviour for a forum (imho).

I am king, try to follow messy tutorial for graphics:
http://themessenger.posterous.com/tut-h … -artmaking

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14 (edited by i am king 2010-09-19 19:37:52)

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WTF!? -5? Hmm okeeii. And how the * do i get 9,000 vieuws hmm 

I will not be suprised if this post gets - 9??

Edit:

This post has 5,000 vieuws no replys either? http://www.teeworlds.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=6717 is the forum bugging? Whats happening?

Art project done in: 7 days.

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i am king wrote:

WTF!? -5? Hmm okeeii. And how the * do i get 9,000 vieuws hmm 

I will not be suprised if this post gets - 9??

Edit:

This post has 5,000 vieuws no replys either? http://www.teeworlds.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=6717 is the forum bugging? Whats happening?

No bugs. Visits aren't related to the post quality. You can have as many visits as you wants but if your contents are poor you will be downvoted.
Another thing: if a post is outdated maybe it has been visited many times, but noone wants to resume it.

Support Staff - ESL.eu Teeworlds Admin

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+1 +2 +3
And btw if you look at the sticky topics you might find out that some of them are closed and dont have any comment, but still 20.000 views tongue

The dumber people think you are, the more surprised they're going to be when you kill them.

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@ The Messenger, That post i posted with the link was only created for like 2 hours and had already 5,000 vieuws :/

@ Lanta, if people don't like my work why dont they tell me like a real man and say your work is ugly! what they do is sit in a corner and press the downvote button with there tiny finger ;3

@ The Community, realy guys? LOL i start to like this forum and be the most hated name in here, tell me is there any 1 who can tell me u keep downvoting me?

@ DarkM, thnx bro ur the "ONLY ONE WHO DOES NOT HATE ME <3"

beside all this bullcrap i made another art please read the text in it verry good might be helpfull ;) 

http://i56.tinypic.com/f3et0y.png

Art project done in: 7 days.

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Keep in mind that we dont hate anyone. Not me I dont.
I didnt rly want to follow the discussion and let me just tell you that its getting boring : Try making more extendendet arts: Maybe ad a rocket launcher or smthing...

The dumber people think you are, the more surprised they're going to be when you kill them.

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@ Messy, i will don't worry (: i was just testin my skills and show it to you guys but yea u guys dint like it so im confused to make one or not because when i will post one it will be down voted again i garantee,

Art project done in: 7 days.

20 (edited by Tee Killa 2010-09-20 20:39:49)

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Yea, it's because you draw Tees which we have seen over and over again. Just a simple Tee with an emotion is boring.
Try yourself in a comic or whatever. Give you pictures some kind of sense. Like, draw a picture with a nice background. Then in the forground two tees who are fighting against each other. (Look here (by Landil) or here (by The Messenger) for two examples)
ANd be creative. Do something new, like Messy and Landil did it. Landil drew and "electric tee" which noone did before. Messy did also some new. A tee made out of a tree (with an awsum background btw wink). So again, don't draw those boring simple pictures and you topic will get +'s.

» Use the Search Function before opening multiple topics...
» Member of: JsA - Just stay Alloha! (since 2009)

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i dont give a shit on these votes. there are several guys voting for fun, so just dont care about it and follow tee killas tips...

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Finnaly some one people who says like a man what they think about my art work, thanks killa (: i am working on a real big art right now and beside that i dont care anymore about votes. I have an cool project where i work on i'm kinda gonna make my own style.

Sneekpeak; It's going to be a art with a story / this project was  "never" done before so yea i hope you like it the first storys will be posted in 1 week so stay prepared (:

Peace,

Art project done in: 7 days.