1 (edited by Teesmart 2010-08-23 10:48:27)

Topic: [ART]First Tee

Good morning!
I am relatively new in Teeworlds. But I just tried to own a first tea

Guten Morgen!
Ich bin Relativ neu in Teeworlds. ich habe mich aber mal versucht an einem ersten eigenen Tee
http://loadmypic.de/bild.php/415,daswepngDD2L8.png
Please critique

Greetings Teesmart
Excuse, but I come from Germany therefore can my English be somewhat bad

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Re: [ART]First Tee

First of all, "Tee" everywhere will be "Tee" xD Second - da pic is to small, I cant read da notes up there, in other... i like da way u drawed the tee's feet, u used inkscape?

I'll show you Kuzma's mother!(c)Nikita Hrushev
DarkMarta - Artist. cool
Rise up, and dont you fall down again... Rise up, its time we break the chains.

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Re: [ART]First Tee

Oh okay ^^
hmm, yes I makes also use Ink.
Again, a new trial:
http://loadmypic.de/bild.php/416,vascpng6XCAR.png

Greetings Teesmart
Excuse, but I come from Germany therefore can my English be somewhat bad

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Re: [ART]First Tee

Kay... i wont say nutn bout da eyes, but da shadows of da feet - the feet that are behind da tees should be ALL in shadow. like here :

http://pikucha.ru/642287/image.jpeg

And another thing bout shadows - if the shadows of da blue tee are in the back of him, HOW could da shadows of the pink tee be infront? O_o if da lights comes from da right-upper corner, da shadows should be in their back, like here =

http://pikucha.ru/642373/image.jpeg

understood?

I'll show you Kuzma's mother!(c)Nikita Hrushev
DarkMarta - Artist. cool
Rise up, and dont you fall down again... Rise up, its time we break the chains.

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Re: [ART]First Tee

maybe somebody is pointing a flashlight at the tees. xD

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