[TEEFOLIO] Apmox's Stuff: New Crazy Scientist

Hello Apmox!
I like your art. My first art was worse than yours. You have your own style and thats good, but I think that it needs to be 'teestylized'.
You should remember that tees don't have mouth, as Snazzy said. Sometimes it is needed to be drawn but don't when you must not. Maybe it should look better with the shadow on the body, also as Snazzy said.
Well done, keep working!!

@Snazzy: It is not much pixeled And about the explosions are easy to make, just use the Pen tool and choose Spiro path in Inkscape

So thank to all for your suggestions.. I tried to fix everything you said..
Let's start:

@Snazzy
1. I resized the pic 800x600 px
2. I put the mouth because he was laughing and without mouth you can't understand it
3. You're right.. I was inspired by the ZippaH's vuvuzela.. But i didn't want to copy it so i tried fix it
4. Shadows fixed

And thank you for these tips

@khubasjn:

Thank you ^^ i fixed your noticed problems..

@Tee Killa:
I added details on the grass; but i have still to fix skin problem.. Sorry but i have no time

BTW Thanks all and continue suggest me problems

I really like your work now. Another time we see, that critic is helpfully and if it gets mentioned you can improove your work . now! before making new artworks, try to implent what you learned today.

sincerely snazzy

he means he liked the vuvuzela style in the first picture more, than the stuff you made in the 2cnd pic (whats coming out form the bottle). understand ?