1 (edited by SkyFX 2010-06-22 21:57:28)

Topic: [ART] nL' iF

Hello folks!
Today i tried to make some tw art ^^ (cause in the last years well i didnt make alot of tw art hadn't got any time).
So here it is Criticism is welcome big_smile
(I know i have to add glow but didnt really find it in photoshop,I only found something but it makes glow on both sides example: right and left side, up and down etc. so it cant make glow where there is shadow...)
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Ok i used your tips DarkM and here it is (i know its not perfect but for my 2. "real" art i think its decent)
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Re: [ART] nL' iF

nice but improovable. please take a look at other graphics threads to learn from them (i mean all, not only the good ones). Keep going

3 (edited by DarkM 2010-06-22 18:39:00)

Re: [ART] nL' iF

Photoshop? ;D Hello brother xDD
Look, yeah, as Snazzy sais - alot to improve.... Its cute but to .. unteeish smile U can make outer glow if u double click on the layer -> "outer glow", or you can copy the layer, make it stand under the layer that u need to give an effect, and blur it (for ex - u need to make layer 1 glow, u copy it, u put layer1 copy under layer1, and go to filter -> blur -> gussians blur)

And - you have the same problem as all begginers... The shadow of the foot that is "under " the body. If the foot is like under the body, then u need to make shadow on ALL of it, cause the shadow comes from the body. Like this : http://pikucha.ru/517034/ExampleOfShadows.jpeg

The clouds look teeish enough, but the rain .. No ;( better make it a little more comic style, and its kinda easy to do in PS) you can draw a drop on a new layer, then erase the "background" layer, then go to
Image -> Trim (press enter) ; Now - Edit -> Define Brush Preset, and then, like in da screenshot :
http://pikucha.ru/517038/RainMakingExample.jpeg

GoodLuck, hope all this text and picz are usefull...

I'll show you Kuzma's mother!(c)Nikita Hrushev
DarkMarta - Artist. cool
Rise up, and dont you fall down again... Rise up, its time we break the chains.

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DarkM what do you think of it now big_smile? my latest art is up there

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Okay, now THAT is ALOT better O_o... Its great! yes, there are some little stuff that u can edit but that just dependz on your imagination wink.

I'll show you Kuzma's mother!(c)Nikita Hrushev
DarkMarta - Artist. cool
Rise up, and dont you fall down again... Rise up, its time we break the chains.

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Ok thanks, Good to know that im on the right path big_smile