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Topic: [Map] Track3

Hi

This is my first map that I post on the forums.. tongue

Name: Track03
Gametype: DM

Screenshot:
Without Game layer:
http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/3162/skjermbilde20100605kl10.png

with Game layer:
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/3162/skjermbilde20100605kl10.png
Download here !

what do you think ?

MertenNor

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Re: [Map] Track3

Hm, it's a bit small, but that's good for some servers:)

I think you should add doodads....

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Re: [Map] Track3

I think I've seen this before...
Anyway, try doing 5 more test run maps before giving maps to the community since you seem pretty new at it.
You can tell the map is confined in a box shape which I don't like. Try editing that. Make more beefier platforms; all of them are as skinny as can be, which is too plain. All the shields and hearts are in only triangle shapes clumps of 3, try mixing that up with either more of them or in a different, but useful, shape.

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Re: [Map] Track3

thanks for the tips guys !
might work on it wen I have the time smile

MertenNor

->My 24/7 servers: [NOR] Norwegian HUB <- Back Online !! big_smile
( My grammar is getting better ! smile I think.. )
-Norway

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Re: [Map] Track3

As it gets every beginner said, orient yourself at standart maps like dm1 etc. smile

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Re: [Map] Track3

options to make it better:
- mountains
- more realistic walls ( not just lines )
- background ( dark gras main tiles )
- less weapons
- dont do lines with gras_main, fullfill the whole map with it and cut peaces out so you have a map.
   ( like in chi1 mapping video )

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