1 Topic by BBz (edited by BBz 2010-02-17 20:15:52)

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Here is a Ava and i'd like to know what is good, what isn't so good
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http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/9256 … ardava.png

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BBz wrote:

Here is a Ava and i'd like to know what is good, what isn't so good
Ty
http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/9256 … ardava.png

Good

Shotgun looks quite wicked
Red eyes + black body, not that bad.
awesome backgroundface smiley yikes?

Not good

Hands look a little bit... too thick
White outline @ Grass
Black Tee (Black is my favorite color, but black tees... sad )
Strange background

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3 Reply by Bananbl4

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as 4 me, this is scary tee!

- What was noise?
- Ze sound of progress, my friend.

4 Reply by [N.W.A] DarkMarta

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Very nice, especially for an avatar! smile Good work, keep goin smile

Before you come to any conclusion - try walking in my shoes - You'll keep stuble in my footsteps...

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It's good for the first. It's amateur but that is expected for the first. :]

But I would like to note that if you make a post for only one image you want criticism on, it pretty much pointless and clutters the forums, but since you already have... use this topic for all your other images in the future.

Give others the respect you wish to be respected with. In the mean time, enjoy the website!

6 Reply by BBz (edited by BBz 2010-02-18 20:16:29)

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here is my first tee skin.... i think its quied good but not so good as these the other make.
i only use inkscape and don't know how to use gimp2
Use it as cammo skin
http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/4510/cammo.png

the black bagground is because its a .png picture
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i think the arm is a little bit 2 round.....

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hmmm...your ava is quite ok, i feel that there is not enough bold outlines to make it cartoon-like. Same for your skin. The arm doesnt matter TOO much, it doesnt show most the time. The body should have a nicer bakground. all over, 6/10. Good for first!

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here another art.. i think this is good
http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/1353/testsvg.png

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BBz wrote:

here is my first tee skin.... i think its quied good but not so good as these the other make.
i only use inkscape and don't know how to use gimp2
Use it as cammo skin
http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/4510/cammo.png

the black bagground is because its a .png picture
BBz

i think the arm is a little bit 2 round.....

I wont comment about the art, just 'cause I cant open it full...It must be my internet again. I'll say something about the skin - I think the foot isnt tee-ish...Its too small. The tee also has to have and
outline. A black outline. And - did you tried it in game? Can you show us please?

Well - for first tee skin its not bad. Keep goin! Get High! smile

Before you come to any conclusion - try walking in my shoes - You'll keep stuble in my footsteps...

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i know, i m hobbyless ^^ no but here are other skins
i think my skins become every time better..
http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/7192/8ballone.png
BBz

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Thats alot better then the last one! You'r doin great! Keep Goin smile
But... What is it? big_smile

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BBz wrote:

here another art.. i think this is good
http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/1353/testsvg.png


I think the eyes are a little bit too small, the gun is not teeish and the muzzle flash isn't either.

Yet, when you just... look at it, it looks nice.

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