1 Topic by Jinx (edited by Jinx 2009-07-31 20:40:58)

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Topic: [TEESKIN] Jinx' first skin - FruitDish Tee :)

Hi there,

since the default skins started to bother me, I made my own, on which I want some feedback, since it is my first skin :D!
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What I want you to tell me is: -For a first skin? Good? Bad?
                                                -If It'd not be a first skin? Good? Bad?
                                                -Idea?
                                                -Creativity?
                                                -General outcome?
                                                -Should I make more?
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That's it, so here's the skin template:

FruitDishSkin
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And the Skin in action:

FruitDishAction
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And for even more paranoid persons, here goes the download link ;)

http://rapidshare.com/files/262257646/F … h.png.html
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Hope you enjoy the skin :D

A reminder: Don't forget the feedback!

2 Reply by Necromancer (edited by Necromancer 2009-07-31 21:44:36)

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Re: [TEESKIN] Jinx' first skin - FruitDish Tee :)

I personally think it's not THAT bad. But I think it may be a little too colorful.
Like the eyes, but the hair looks like he threw a mop on his head.
I also think his hands are pretty large. Good first try, though.

edit: I think you should keep trying.

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3 Reply by FroZen

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Re: [TEESKIN] Jinx' first skin - FruitDish Tee :)

Necromancer, This is my Personal Avatar, so please use another... a ravatar from bobsmiley? or others.


back 2 topic: i think it looks a litte bit funny, but... its not very teeish.

4 Reply by Slayer *gV* (edited by Slayer *gV* 2009-07-31 22:28:11)

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Re: [TEESKIN] Jinx' first skin - FruitDish Tee :)

its not very teeish.

why it isnt teeish? i think its teeish, but the general outcome isnt so good. i dont like the colours ö.Ö and the eyes and hands are too big. looks a bit like a clown wink
make it "cooler" wink

your "list":
-For a first skin? Good? Bad?
                                                -If It'd not be a first skin? Good? Bad? "Middle"
                                                -Idea? "Good"
                                                -Creativity? "Too Good, so it looks bad wink"
                                                -General outcome? "Clown"
                                                -Should I make more? "First fix it"

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Re: [TEESKIN] Jinx' first skin - FruitDish Tee :)

I'm coming good with it, but that's not the point.

I like colors as you may have noticed, yet : D
But it isn't clear which issues I now should fix: Whats to large?
                                                                          Color Change?
                                                                          And so on ...

Thx for your feedback : P

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Re: [TEESKIN] Jinx' first skin - FruitDish Tee :)

The error I see in your map are the eyes-hair combination. Because your eyebrows and eyes are overlapping the hair, the result is a strange look of the eyes floating over the hair. I recommend that you make the hair shorter / higher up instead of down low, where it does not overlap with the eyebrows. Also, the vibrant colours are sometimes strange to look at, and I recommend that you take shades of the same colour for the whole tee.

I hope this helps.

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Re: [TEESKIN] Jinx' first skin - FruitDish Tee :)

Putting the hair up higher results in loss of the actual idea =/

Further, it'd be some work putting it higher and set it to a look-nice, but I'll try my best smile

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Not really my kinda thing, the colors are quite awful...

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