1 Topic by khubajsn (edited by khubajsn 2008-08-03 17:43:17)

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Topic: [MAP] really_dm

This is my 1st map.
Name:really_dm
Gametypes:DM,TDM
Screenshot:
http://marines.vdl.pl/teestuff/uploads/shots/med/really_dm_1217423444.jpg
Download: click here
Size: 1,6 kB
Description Really DM - small map
Author: Khubajsn
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This map is also available on TeeStuff,too
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I know, map have got a white background and its poor, but who want can edit it ;-) - its my 1st map Im glad, so there are any functional background

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2 Reply by Lappi

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Re: [MAP] really_dm

Uhm, why do you publish it, if even you think that it is poor and should be improved?

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Re: [MAP] really_dm

Okok first map but try to improve on the playability ... i hope u know what i mean. Fix the tiling, note the tees need space to move .. not 1 tile wide chambers. And maybe u want to publish only good maps, so the forums wont look like a mess. I made about 3 maps after I published my first map. Be sure to play the maps for a while ( with others not alone ) after u make em, to see what could be improved. Dont take it as an offense but i dont think i would enjoy playing on this map.

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4 Reply by khubajsn (edited by khubajsn 2008-08-04 07:59:27)

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Re: [MAP] really_dm

Hmm. Im sorry sad my next map will be better smile
EDIT: By the way, how would you rate my first map with regard to it the first?

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5 Reply by FireArrow

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Re: [MAP] really_dm

Kind of low, sorry...

Mainly due to the bad tiling and placing of pick-ups.
To the next time, there are a few things you should think about:
-Never leave any edge untiled. It looks bad.
-Don't create large collections of health and armor. Avoid bigger then 3-4, and never bigger then 6 (the about of damage you take from a direct hit from a grenade).
-Be sparse with placing of guns. To much guns available is a common problem.
-Think to yourself, "Is this map funny? Could I play this all day(/night) long? Would I be proud about this map?"
-Don't release a map thinking maybe someone else will like it, because if you don't like it, it's unlikely others will.

Good luck and happy mapping smile

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