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Topic: [MAP] CTF Revenge 1

Hi, all! This is the first release of my first map, CTF Revenge 1. It's for...uh...CTF.

Download link:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14668680/ctfr1.map

Here are two screenshots. Sorry about my mouse cursor; I couldn't get rid of it sad

The full map:

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14668680/ctfr1_full.png

And a closeup:

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14668680/ctfr1_closeup.png

Feedback, especially negative feedback, would be much appreciated. Thanks in advance.

You'll find me in the game as 'coriolan.' I'm not very good.

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The map is a bit too small for all the pickups, you should remove them.
I aswell made a change and took a view pictures here (zoomed out): http://imgur.com/a/EHReD
The map itself isn't bad, good work smile

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Surprisingly good for a first map. Unusual structure and pretty good movements. Even tho these unhookable tiles make you able to hide behind the unhookable wall with a flag, which is bad. Also, as BotoX said, there's too much pickups, still their placement is good.
Keep up a good work.

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There are some very well designed spots... wink

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Thanks heaps for all the feedback, folks.

BotoX, I noticed the excess of pickups while playtesting this. I'll take out a few weapons, hearts, and shields.

Variecs, you have an excellent point about the unhookables. I've fixed it according to BotoX's suggestion.

Thank you, Zatline smile Are there any spots in particular that you have in mind?

You'll find me in the game as 'coriolan.' I'm not very good.

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LOL first map?? This is brilliant! I love it! If you need a server to host it on then I will. But I will also have other maps in my server. I think your map has a very unique layout. Its like if you mess up while hitting one of the "upesedy" parts of the map, then you get to the flag ten times faster. Outright good map.
Keep up the exellent work.

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Lord Kirby wrote:

If you need a server to host it on then I will. But I will also have other maps in my server.

That would be awesome! You're totally free to use it.

You'll find me in the game as 'coriolan.' I'm not very good.

8 (edited by Kirbs 2012-09-05 00:34:37)

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Corbomite wrote:
Lord Kirby wrote:

If you need a server to host it on then I will. But I will also have other maps in my server.

That would be awesome! You're totally free to use it.

Aw thanks dude! Here it is big_smile

184.6.37.18:8303

184.6.32.1:8303

208.33.159.39:8303

71.2.28.14:8303
One of those will work^^

Password is turkey.

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Nice map.

Although I think it is too tight for the amount of players you intended/amount of pickups placed.
Perhaps the map editor doesn't give a good notion of size... dunno (four/five-tile passages are small).

I also feel like mid, besides being really small, is kinda useless. I can't see much action going on in that part of the map, because there aren't enough pickups in it (if you intend to change it, please don't just add more stuff; redistribute).
(edit) Maybe consider something like this: http://i.imgur.com/u9YVJ.png
(edit2) Even if small, the map feels really good.

I'd also avoid those two very close shotguns in base. smile

Anyway, it's nice to see new ctf maps.

check out these maps: infiltrate - choco - dustycloud

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I love it.

You named it CTF Revenge 1. So that means your gonna make Revenge 2,3...?? smile big_smile

Once in a century...

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Slinack wrote:

I also feel like mid, besides being really small, is kinda useless. I can't see much action going on in that part of the map, because there aren't enough pickups in it (if you intend to change it, please don't just add more stuff; redistribute).
(edit) Maybe consider something like this: http://i.imgur.com/u9YVJ.png

I've implemented your suggestion, as well as a cosmetic change to the top bit of the map. Thanks!

DARK HUNTER wrote:

You named it CTF Revenge 1. So that means your gonna make Revenge 2,3...??

You bet! I got a little tired of the ordinary ensemble of CTF maps, so I decided to make my own series just for fun.

You'll find me in the game as 'coriolan.' I'm not very good.

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It feels better now.

But 5 lasers is too much. Try reducing it to 1, 2 or 3 *if you want*.

check out these maps: infiltrate - choco - dustycloud

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Hey Corbomite, I'll host your new map too!
And the address is still 184.6.37.18:8303.
Password is still turkey.
I think that your map has some odd pickup placement. -.-
Like two shotguns coming out of the hole/base, and 4 grenades side by side and ontop of each other.
And the lasers are really placed good. But I'm happy with it.

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