1 (edited by Worm 2009-07-16 20:33:29)

Topic: [MAP] flyway2blueday

Hi!
Im created new map xD (fly)
Link : http://dl1.s31.ifile.it/mui7r3al/flyway2blueday.map
Quads : blue background and animation
Dificult : medium
Screen shots :
http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/7853/screenshot0011s.png

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/9508/screenshot0012.png

http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/7803/screenshot0013.png

http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/7765/screenshot0014.png
Have Fun!
--Worms

2 (edited by [JD]TeeTee 2009-07-16 23:45:42)

Re: [MAP] flyway2blueday

Hey, could u make a screenshot when u are in the editor, that we see the whole map?
Thanks...^^ btw. i can see some graphic bugs on those screenshots :S

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Re: [MAP] flyway2blueday

Yeah, take screenshot from editor.
Good Map smile
big_smile

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http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/2990/imageiag.jpg

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Re: [MAP] flyway2blueday

the mapping is very bad, very much graphic bugs...no ideas only a quad and a tilelayer.. dont like it sry

6 (edited by khubajsn 2009-07-19 09:51:27)

Re: [MAP] flyway2blueday

@ All maps critics:
I think you may be more friendly and less stringent in next cause you comment novice mappers' map. He is having no experience with making maps and you didn't say anything what he can fix. Please choose - write better critic which is containing reason of your negative rating or don't post these useless posts to this type of threads.

@Worm:
Worm, do you know the Envelope editor? If no, its no problem to learn it from manual in sticked topic in Content: Maps category. Its not easy part of map editor, so, I will understand when you will not do it. Animated backgrounds are really nice in current maps and they shows experience of they're author. But you can still change the colour of background, its ugly, very ugly. Make it darker or lighter, no only blue. Then fix the graphics bugs like on this image with Landil's grass main, or change them or drop them from the map:
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9412/help.jpg

Try to release next version of your map with fix of all (or most of) bugs I see.
I hope it will better smile
Khubajsn

Goodbye all. Account inactive since March 2011.

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@Zeratul: EDIT: And for you, Sn@ZzY too
I think you may be more friendly and less stringent in next cause you comment novice mappers' map. He is having no experience with making maps and you didn't say anything what he can fix. Please choose - write better critic which is containing reason of your negative rating or don't post these useless posts to this type of threads.

sry that i have an own opinion. although he didnt say anything that this is his first map <>.<>...

hey khubajsn you criticise my critic?! its not your thread so dont say me which kind of critic i may post here or not..

8 (edited by khubajsn 2009-07-19 09:52:17)

Re: [MAP] flyway2blueday

Sn@ZzY wrote:

@Zeratul: EDIT: And for you, Sn@ZzY too
I think you may be more friendly and less stringent in next cause you comment novice mappers' map. He is having no experience with making maps and you didn't say anything what he can fix. Please choose - write better critic which is containing reason of your negative rating or don't post these useless posts to this type of threads.

sry that i have an own opinion. although he didnt say anything that this is his first map <>.<>...

hey khubajsn you criticise my critic?! its not your thread so dont say me which kind of critic i may post here or not..

Of course, you are free to share your opinion here, I am doing the same thing.
I just say everybody (not only You and Zeratul) can be better and say what he dont like.
There is a lot of great maps created only with three layers (Tile, Game, Quad)
Say what you want, do what you want. Its my opinion.
[EDIT]

Sn@ZzY wrote:

although he didnt say anything that this is his first map

You don't see his rank? New member..
[/EDIT]

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khubajsn wrote:
Sn@ZzY wrote:

@Zeratul: EDIT: And for you, Sn@ZzY too
I think you may be more friendly and less stringent in next cause you comment novice mappers' map. He is having no experience with making maps and you didn't say anything what he can fix. Please choose - write better critic which is containing reason of your negative rating or don't post these useless posts to this type of threads.

sry that i have an own opinion. although he didnt say anything that this is his first map <>.<>...

hey khubajsn you criticise my critic?! its not your thread so dont say me which kind of critic i may post here or not..

Of course, you are free to share your opinion here, I am doing the same thing.
I just say everybody (not only You and Zeratul) can be better and say what he dont like.
There is a lot of great maps created only with three layers (Tile, Game, Quad)
Say what you want, do what you want. Its my opinion.

i dont think that there are a lot of those maps because they are boring you dont see anything except of this lame tilelayer..you need doodads and very much more.. for a good map or do you think you could win the MDC with that xD?so in your eyes a good map is also okay with only game,quad,and tile layer? good luck..

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Re: [MAP] flyway2blueday

Sn@ZzY wrote:
khubajsn wrote:
Sn@ZzY wrote:

sry that i have an own opinion. although he didnt say anything that this is his first map <>.<>...

hey khubajsn you criticise my critic?! its not your thread so dont say me which kind of critic i may post here or not..

Of course, you are free to share your opinion here, I am doing the same thing.
I just say everybody (not only You and Zeratul) can be better and say what he dont like.
There is a lot of great maps created only with three layers (Tile, Game, Quad)
Say what you want, do what you want. Its my opinion.

i dont think that there are a lot of those maps because they are boring you dont see anything except of this lame tilelayer..you need doodads and very much more.. for a good map or do you think you could win the MDC with that xD?so in your eyes a good map is also okay with only game,quad,and tile layer? good luck..

Argh.. On map is most important gameplay and balance. Graphics and other details are on the second place. This is my last reply related to our different opinions. Of course, best map must have more layers. Newbie is happy he created something new and he hoped community will like it or help him. With your reply style, there won't be much new players. Howgh.

Goodbye all. Account inactive since March 2011.

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Re: [MAP] flyway2blueday

khubajsn wrote:
Sn@ZzY wrote:
khubajsn wrote:

Of course, you are free to share your opinion here, I am doing the same thing.
I just say everybody (not only You and Zeratul) can be better and say what he dont like.
There is a lot of great maps created only with three layers (Tile, Game, Quad)
Say what you want, do what you want. Its my opinion.

i dont think that there are a lot of those maps because they are boring you dont see anything except of this lame tilelayer..you need doodads and very much more.. for a good map or do you think you could win the MDC with that xD?so in your eyes a good map is also okay with only game,quad,and tile layer? good luck..

Argh.. On map is most important gameplay and balance. Graphics and other details are on the second place. This is my last reply related to our different opinions. Of course, best map must have more layers. Newbie is happy he created something new and he hoped community will like it or help him. With your reply style, there won't be much new players. Howgh.


this was the first time that i answered like this because i think this map is really not good...but good if you think its better for teeworlds i wont answer to map threads from now on wink only for you

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khubajsn wrote:

@Worm:
Worm, do you know the Envelope editor? If no, its no problem to learn it from manual in sticked topic in Content: Maps category. Its not easy part of map editor, so, I will understand when you will not do it. Animated backgrounds are really nice in current maps and they shows experience of they're author. But you can still change the colour of background, its ugly, very ugly. Make it darker or lighter, no only blue. Then fix the graphics bugs like on this image with Landil's grass main, or change them or drop them from the map:
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9412/help.jpg

Try to release next version of your map with fix of all (or most of) bugs I see.
I hope it will better smile
Khubajsn

kk i make this in flywa2blueday2

13 (edited by Slayer *gV* 2009-07-19 15:40:37)

Re: [MAP] flyway2blueday

khubajsn: its ok if it urs opinion, but i didnt say any other things as u said!
there are many grafical bugs, there are not rly own ideas to see for me and there isnt a background. and only he is a new member it dont has to be his first map?
but:
Worm: is it ur first map?
put tiles into the background, like a sun, a moon, clouds, or whatever. so the map looks rly more interesting
the weapons arent balanced, all weapons on one place...i dont like it.
beware on flymaps long ways without changings (look to pic. 3)
but the black squares in the background and do them behind the other tiles too, so it looks better
sry for my bad english

difficulty: seems to be too easy, but i will test it now....will give u a commend to it wink

14 (edited by Worm 2009-07-19 15:48:37)

Re: [MAP] flyway2blueday

Zeratul wrote:

Worm: is it ur first map?

LOL!
Look for Mini tee life! (not my first map)

Zeratul wrote:

flyways is long ways

new name map is flyrace_blueday hmm

15 (edited by Slayer *gV* 2009-07-26 12:07:05)

Re: [MAP] flyway2blueday

New version is out:
Download: Flyrace_blueday

Here some screens....:
http://www2.pic-upload.de/25.07.09/waso2tmr5y1r.png


http://www2.pic-upload.de/25.07.09/9hny5qydp4kw.png


http://www2.pic-upload.de/25.07.09/rnhi51pwwxh3.png


http://www2.pic-upload.de/25.07.09/3gfh2lpjjva.png


___________________________________________________________

Changelog of Slayer:
- spikes fixed
- border fixed
- mapsize fixed
- background fixed
- teleports got colorful quads // transparens = 150
- teleports fixed
- weaponplaces changed (only coz of optics^^)
- tiles fixed

___________________________________________________________

This was an optional project of: {Atze} Slayer © [GTF]

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Re: [MAP] flyway2blueday

Thank you zeratoul!
you fixed all bugs!!!

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Zeratul wrote:

New version is out:


___________________________________________________________

Changelog of Slayer:
- spikes fixed
- border fixed
- mapsize fixed
- background fixed
- teleports got colorful quads
- teleports fixed
- weaponplaces changed (only coz of optics^^)
- tiles fixed

___________________________________________________________

This was an optional project of: {Atze} Slayer © [GTF]

Worms will never learn from his fails and bugs, when we help him. He should correct his bugged map himself!

Join JD, we search some good players!
Everybody can make a map, but nobody has good ideas wink

18 (edited by khubajsn 2009-07-26 09:31:03)

Re: [MAP] flyway2blueday

Worm, congratulations wink
You should update the first post wink
I have last suggestion - the shadows (teleports) may be a bit transparent - it will make nice effect. Right click to all corners I have marked and decrease the alpha, e.g. to 200 from 255 wink
Do it not only with this shadow, but with all wink
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/808/helpi.jpg
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