1 Topic by KillaBilla (edited by KillaBilla 2009-04-23 15:57:35)

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Topic: [MAPs] ifreeze_KB

Hello everybody,
I finished my first ifreeze maps:

-ifreeze_KB_1   (267.36kb)
Tilesets: Water_main by Crises
Gametyps: ifreeze, tdm, ctf, ifrzctf (and all others)
Download: http://uploaded.to/file/aj86o3
Screenshot: http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/9664/ifreezekb1j.png


-ifreeze_KB_2   (268.98kb)
Tilesets: Water_main by Crises
Gametyps: ifreeze, ifrzctf, ctf, tdm, dm (all other too)
Download:  http://uploaded.to/file/u36hh6
Screenshot: http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/4831/ifreezekb2.png


Comments are welcome

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2 Reply by LordSk

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Re: [MAPs] ifreeze_KB

1. The gameplay of your two map is really bad :
- there is not any platform to hook well and there is big empty area, that sux for instagib.
2. your background is a bit simple.

Have a look at official maps, to know what is a basic teeworlds map.
Of course, you certainly don't know that before because you are new.

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3 Reply by KillaBilla

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Re: [MAPs] ifreeze_KB

1. OK I will look at it.
2. I have no ideas to make it better... , what shoud I improve?

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4 Reply by Lololol

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Re: [MAPs] ifreeze_KB

Now, I am a experienced iCTF player and I would say..

MAP 1

BAD:
-There isn't much tactic to it..too much free place...
GOOD:
-Finally a map with free place, but that isn't meant like that...

MAP 2

Good: This could be a 1on1 fun map...a short fast-paced fight
BAD: No tactic at all, background bad, no tactic...

I would like  to make a map with you, I have helped on a few maps before..You would design it and I would make the ideas and tactics..
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5 Reply by lolwtfcoookies98

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Re: [MAPs] ifreeze_KB

I think the IDEA for 1 is good, but 2 is ugly. not trying to be cruel, xD

hehhehehehehehe.

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Re: [MAPs] ifreeze_KB

One can certainly see that it's one of your first maps. And for a first map, it's quite good. But I think that maybe you should wait a bit more and practice, and one day come up with something big. So far so good, my friend. But maybe not enough yet... Keep practicing!

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Re: [MAPs] ifreeze_KB

I will work on it, but how to make this blue and yellow/organge backgroung like in the other maps? If I use Quads the only have color in one Corner.

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8 Reply by Tee Killa

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Re: [MAPs] ifreeze_KB

Klick on all red points in the corners and change to numbers

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Re: [MAPs] ifreeze_KB

Each corner has its color, so try all the colors and play with all the corners.

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10 Reply by KillaBilla (edited by KillaBilla 2009-04-19 16:46:54)

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Re: [MAPs] ifreeze_KB

I changed the second map! Now I think it is real better than the old one.
It is also ready for downloading and for watching. Have a try...

For the first one I don't know what I can improve, pls help me.


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Re: [MAPs] ifreeze_KB

Again to the second one:

  • Try to make a new layer with gras_doodads and add them to your map i can promise you i will look a bit better then now smile

  • And change to colour of background... my eyes hurt... look out and see how the sky looks

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Re: [MAPs] ifreeze_KB

1.I already used many grass_doodads, but I added some more now.
2.OK the background is a bit friendlier... sorry for your eyes... my map now looks like the sky.

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13 Reply by lolwtfcoookies98

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Re: [MAPs] ifreeze_KB

shoadows in 2 are a bit weird, maybe use quads for shadows

hehhehehehehehe.

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Re: [MAPs] ifreeze_KB

====UPDATE====
ifreeze_KB_1:

  • -Better background

  • -now ready for ctf

  • -freeze tiles added

  • -new ways

ifreeze_KB_2:

  • Better shadows

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15 Reply by DinoSmoothie

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Re: [MAPs] ifreeze_KB

Very good smile For the first one you just need more free spaces where there aren't spikes. With all the spikes theres not enough space to actually play the game big_smile

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Re: [MAPs] ifreeze_KB

bad, anyway smile unbalanced,gameplay is terrible

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