1 Topic by iphone747 (edited by iphone747 2009-04-05 10:13:45)

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Topic: [MAP-BETA] The Garden

BETA

Description : The Garden
Mod : CTF/DM/TDM
Version : 0.5.x

Hi@all

For my new Map "The Garden" i would start at first a beta Version, because
i need your help to make the Map Perfect.
So you can give me some Comments about:

-what do you think about the map (good/bad)
-discous about the Gameplay
-are bugs in the map
-and some other thinks what you think this should changed!

But before you testing the map.....
a big thank on LANDIL for the great Waterfall. Thank`s a lot for this great work.

Here is a Screenshorts about the map.
http://cebit.ce.ohost.de/The%20Garden.png
http://i.creativecommons.org/l/by-nc/3.0/80x15.png

and here is the Download Link
Beta 2

Thanks for helping


Here i added some detailed screenshorts 1 2 3

2 Reply by DinoSmoothie

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Re: [MAP-BETA] The Garden

Nice:)

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Looks detailed and it have a good gameplay. But please give us a little bigger pic because this pic is to small.

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Really nice smile The waterfall is looking fantastic

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Re: [MAP-BETA] The Garden

Graphics: 1
Gameplay: 1.5
Item/Flag positions: 2
Filesize compared to the included graphics: 1
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All over: 1.5 smile really nice

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very nice smile

u made me have a very good idea for a new map smile

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And this is a surprise, I guess! What a pity! tongue

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8 Reply by Coold0wn (edited by Coold0wn 2009-04-04 15:29:21)

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Re: [MAP-BETA] The Garden

hm if u wanna know - i'll tell u
but then it won't be exciting anymore wink

btw very nice waterfall landil wink

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Coold0wn wrote:

hm if u wanna know - i'll tell u
but then it won't be exciting anymore wink

Okay, I let me surprise, but then the map must be excellent.

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10 Reply by Coold0wn (edited by Coold0wn 2009-04-04 16:11:32)

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Well i know this is beta but here are the main mistakes u made :

http://www.image-upload.net/images/6ra1p2eswgp3jjxn62gc.png
http://www.image-upload.net/images/3lo8e18visnx9mjbz8z.png
http://www.image-upload.net/images/7auazrxuj3uahxbzfh9k.png
http://www.image-upload.net/images/3877eua818mo7o0tyz.png
http://www.image-upload.net/images/0d8pkg5cswo29l1pfe1.png
http://www.image-upload.net/images/bksifpized8p8lckg6y.png
http://www.image-upload.net/images/yssxvwfe4zb1qcpckcx.png
http://www.image-upload.net/images/34n4beok8rb8aien18po.png
http://www.image-upload.net/images/5mhy3lgzexqqo5x2si5.png

its same with efeu and blatt 1 und blatt 2 tileset.
u didnt use them all..
but they do make you map bigger

I hope ull fix them
and
Welcome to the Teeworlds Mappers World smile
i know its hard to make a map perfect graphic bug free wink



And here another tipp:
Dont make ur map look that boring (except waterfall and water - it is =/ .. )
maybe u go to ifreeze sv with the map ifreeze6
and look what i mean smile

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Re: [MAP-BETA] The Garden

Coold0wn, my respect to you, nice review!

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its cause i think i ll be off soon..
teeworlds is just not that much fun too me anymore
and now i want to give everything to next gen of mappers wink
i working on a vid smile

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Coold0wn wrote:

its cause i think i ll be off soon..
teeworlds is just not that much fun too me anymore
and now i want to give everything to next gen of mappers wink
i working on a vid smile

Next gen of mapper... smile

And you are going to be old school. XD

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nice idea smile
hehe

If anyone has questions just ask wink

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Great map, great waterfall! I love it!

But the background in the cave need to be more beautifull i think.

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On the map is one thing that I dont like. The grass ball and the platform from where the waterfall coming are flying in the sky. Add in the backround something.

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Re: [MAP-BETA] The Garden

Thanks a lot for the big Feedback!

@Cooldown
i fixed
-the unhookable Tileset
-the entrence into the red base
-the missing Grassball
-the sheet on the blue team

Because the Smileys and the arrows i like it because this looks funny (but if other players means that it doesn`t looks good i will remove it ok?)

the really small space between the gold and the ground is a lit a bit tricky. So i had to change the tileset and give the gold a new position. (But i try to make it better)

At the moment i am working on the Clouds (looks like your iFreeze6)

But thanks for your big TEST!

@Friggen123 Thanks for the idea with the backround i think i will add the Mountain tileset into the backround

Greatings

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Coold0wn wrote:

http://www.image-upload.net/images/34n4beok8rb8aien18po.png

You can reflect the coins on the x-axis, and put it behind the other layer and then it would look better.

Btw, I really like the smiley, but I personaly would remove the arrow, because then there are too many same tiles at one place wink

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Excellet map!

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TeE~KillA wrote:
Coold0wn wrote:

http://www.image-upload.net/images/34n4beok8rb8aien18po.png

You can reflect the coins on the x-axis, and put it behind the other layer and then it would look better.

Btw, I really like the smiley, but I personaly would remove the arrow, because then there are too many same tiles at one place wink


or just on the y and then put one behind the wall..
i dont get ur point sry Oo xD

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21 Reply by Coold0wn (edited by Coold0wn 2009-04-04 22:15:17)

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bobsmiley wrote:

On the map is one thing that I dont like. The grass ball and the platform from where the waterfall coming are flying in the sky. Add in the backround something.


not a big prob in my opinion

edit:

If u want i will pimp it too the very high smile
but first fix everything how u want it.

the smiley is not too big prob
but arrow sux xD

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Yea make the tutorial coold0wn. Youve been too mucha of a good mapper, time to give some other guys a chance.

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hehe
its just ..
i dont know what programm to use
i tried fraps and cam studio
but i dunno how to deal with none of em..

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It's a nice map, I think the game play could be better.
Sweet water fall. smile

And at the bottom at the water fall looks weird... maybe clouds should be at the bottom swirling around . big_smile

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Czech TeeWorlds fansite has got a new article about your map, iphone
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